The graph below shows the usage of oil in four different countries between 1966 and 2006 as a percentage of total energuy use within each nation.
The diagram illustrates the
oil
consumption from 1966 to 2006 in four areas of the world. Overall
, Turkey
is the only country where their oil
usage
has increased compared to the other countries that showed a huge decrease in the number, except for Italy which represents a slight decline.
First,
Turkey
is taking the lead in oil
usage
as the percentage developed from 60% to 90%, making it the highest country among the four in oil
usage
. Secondly
, despite that their consumption decreased in 2006, Italy still, they are less than Turkey
by about 5%.
On the other hand
, Sweden and Iceland showed a huge change as their usage
were
before 80% and 70%, respectively, and after that, it took a steep down throughout the years reaching 35% and 20%, respectively, in 2006.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
To sum up
, although
three out of four countries reduced their oil
usage
in 2006 in comparison to 1966, Turkey
was the only one that their
demand for Correct pronoun usage
whose
oil
elevated in 2006.Submitted by okalqusay on
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