The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisonn where relevant
The two maps provide information about the access of road between 2007 and 2010 to a city hospital. In general, it was clear that there was roudabout in the right side of the staff car park in 2010.
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