task1 the graph below gives iformation on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
The line graph provides key information about the figures of
people
who take a
part Correct article usage
apply
for
some activities (Change preposition
in
film
club
-martial arts -amateur dramatics -table tennis -musical performances) at a social centre in Australia specifically in Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.
First of all, there were not
Correct your spelling
no
people
who joined musical performances in 2000 and 2005. In 2010 the number of participants increased to 10 people
. Secondly
, table tennis and amateur dramatics in 2000 were almost 15 and 25, respectively. It is also
important to highlight that, both table tennis and amateur dramatics were the same number of people
who joined the club
in 2010, at 20 people
.
However
, martial arts in 2000 was around 35 people
. In addition
, martial arts peaked in 2010. Moreover
, film
club
almost the trend steady Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
in
over the 20 years. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, film
club
decreased in 2010 Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
than
jumped in 2020.
Correct your spelling
then
To sum up
, we could say that, the film
club
was the most activity people
enjoyed comparison with musical performances.Submitted by joudaalhammadi on
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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