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The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.
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The graph compares the
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 of four different species of fish, named
Atlantic
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Cod
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, Haddock,
Yellowfinfin
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Tuna
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 and Swordfish between the years 1982 to 2007. A brief glance at the graph indicates that the total of
Atlantic
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Cod
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 fish has been the most during the given period of time, except for the year 1992, when the
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Yellowfinfin
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Yellowfin tuna
Tuna
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 was the maximum in sum among the given four species. In 1982, there were 225,000
Atlantic
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Cod
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, but the number dropped dramatically and reached approximately 150,000 by the year 1992. After that,
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, the commercial rose again and reached 175,000 by 2002. From 2002 to 2007 the
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 decreased again and reached 125,000. The
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Yellowfinfin
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Yellowfin
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,
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, followed the opposite trend to
Atlantic
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Cod
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 till 2002, but after that dropped in
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 to 100,000 by 2007. The Swordfish
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 were in the minority for the entire 25-year period and they remained at 10,000. The Haddock
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 were stable at about 75,000 throughout the given time.
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, the number of
Atlantic
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Cod
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 and
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Yellowfinfin
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Yellowfin tuna
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 declined over the period with some fluctuations, but the number of the other two species remained more or less unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words atlantic, cod, yellowfinfin, tuna, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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