The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.
The graph compares the
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of four different species of fish, named
Atlantic
Cod
, Haddock,
Yellowfinfin
Tuna
and Swordfish between the years 1982 to 2007. A brief glance at the graph indicates that the total of
Atlantic
Cod
fish has been the most during the given period of time, except for the year 1992, when the
Yellowfinfin
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Yellowfin tuna
Tuna
was the maximum in sum among the given four species. In 1982, there were 225,000
Atlantic
Cod
, but the number dropped dramatically and reached approximately 150,000 by the year 1992. After that,
however
, the commercial rose again and reached 175,000 by 2002. From 2002 to 2007 the
numbers
decreased again and reached 125,000. The
Yellowfinfin
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Yellowfin
Tuna
,
on the other hand
, followed the opposite trend to
Atlantic
Cod
till 2002, but after that dropped in
numbers
to 100,000 by 2007. The Swordfish
numbers
were in the minority for the entire 25-year period and they remained at 10,000. The Haddock
numbers
also
were stable at about 75,000 throughout the given time.
overall
, the number of
Atlantic
Cod
and
Yellowfinfin
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Yellowfin tuna
Tuna
declined over the period with some fluctuations, but the number of the other two species remained more or less unchanged.
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