The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Line graph)
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The line chart illustrates information about the amount of queries made by the Tourist Information Office in one town over a six-month period in the year 2011.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that in-person and by-letter queries showed an increase,
while
by-letter and email presented a general decrease. In January, in-person started at the lowest point at just above 400.
However
, it gradually went up to 800 in March, following that, rose dramatically and reached the highest stop at about 1900
at the end
of the period.
In addition
, by telephone was in first place at the beginning of the period with just above 800 and it went down after a month and reached its lowest mark at exactly 800.
Although
, it rose and stayed at the same mark for two months at 1000,
furthermore
, by telephone enquiries increased sharply and reached 1600 in June.
Along with
that, by letter and email enquiries slightly fell to approximately 700 and depicted moderately downward trends and went to just under 400,
finally
levelled out in
this
position to the
last
month.
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