The chart below shows the number of different types of vehicles registered in European use from 1996 to 2006.
The picture illustrates the information about the amount of transportation users in
European
between 1996 and 2006.
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Europe
Overall
, there were particularly 5 sections, which had their number each. Therefore
, the highest number of users was private cars, by contrast
, public transports
claimed the smallest amounts and Fix the agreement mistake
transport
also
the unchanged status. Meanwhile, the first-rate fluctuation belonged to trucks.
As well as
can be seen from the chart, the first vehicle which achieved the highest number of registers in both 1996 and 2006, consequently
, which
claimed that 26% of changes, from approximately 20 to 25 Correct pronoun usage
apply
millions
. Change to singular
million
In addition
, by having a similar trend, while
trucks had nearly 2 millions
registers in 1996, the remaining achieved a tiny margin rather than the previous. Change to singular
million
Besides
, in 2006, four-wheel vehicles have been
dramatically Verb problem
apply
enhanced
1,5 higher from 1996, about 50%, which had the best fluctuation. Verb problem
increased by
Finally
, others manufactured about 33% from both years, consequently
, which increased 1 tons
of registers in 2006.
Change to a singular noun
ton
Additionally
, on the contrary
, 3 remaining parts have shown the opposite trend. Therefore
, started
at 4 tons of subscribers in 1996, motorbikes have declined Wrong verb form
starting
around
33% in users. Change preposition
by around
Furthermore
, the only transportation had the unchanged status, which belonged to public transports
, Fix the agreement mistake
transport
consequently
, which remained at the
similar rate, about 1000 Correct article usage
a
thousands
in 2 years.Change to singular
thousand
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