The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The table presents data on the underground railway
networks
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in six cities.
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, the three oldest systems, in London, Paris and Tokyo, have longer routes and carry many more passengers every year than the three in Washington DC, Kyoto and Los
Angelas
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Angeles
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. Opening in 1863 and covering 394
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kilometers
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,
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London
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is the oldest and longest of the systems in the six cities. Railway systems opened in Paris in 1900 and Tokyo in 1927. Even though they are less than 200
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kilometers
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long, they have the largest annual passenger numbers, at 1927
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for Tokyo and 1191
million
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for Paris. Kyoto and Los Angeles were the
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two of these cities to have their own railway
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. These two
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have the shortest routes, at 11 and 28
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respectively, and are used by the smallest numbers of passengers per year, at 45 and 50
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respectively. Compared with the two
networks
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mentioned above, the one in Washington DC is relatively long, at 126
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kilometers
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, and has a relatively large yearly passenger count, at 144
million
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.
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