Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem ?
Over the
last
few years, most people
throw
away their waste Wrong verb form
have thrown
at
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on
street
especially,plastic Correct article usage
the street
product
and as Fix the agreement mistake
products
result
,it Correct article usage
a result
damage
the atmosphere and environment. In Wrong verb form
has damaged
this
essay, I will do my best to discuss and give relevant example
for Fix the agreement mistake
examples
solve
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solving
this
issue.
On the one hand, nowadays many people
are very lazy, so they don't throw the
waste Change the word
their
to
the rubbish and it Change preposition
into
bring
a lot of diseases and the Azone Change the verb form
brings
erriosion
. Correct your spelling
erosion
For example
, climate change or global warming. As a result
,many people
suffer from global warming and skin diseases and even,in the future,it will bring deadly diseases.In addition
,another significant reason of
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for
this
issue could be that, If atmosphere
Correct article usage
the atmosphere
continue
to Change the verb form
continues
damaging
, it may be Change the form of the verb
damage
ruduce
Correct your spelling
reduce
live
Change the word
living
in
Earth. Because, as a reason of Azone Change preposition
on
erriosion
, in the Earth reduce the water, plants, animals and others.
Correct your spelling
erosion
On the other hand
, despite the fact that damaging environment
one a serious Correct article usage
the environment
problem
, there are some reliable solutios
to it. The first viable solution to Correct your spelling
solutions
solution
this
problem
is increase
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is increasing
is increased
number
of rubbish Change the article
the number
at
the streets. And Change preposition
on
government
, not Add an article
the government
also
government
may
be Verb problem
apply
also
people
should to worried about each others
, If we continue to damage Change to a singular noun
other
environment
, one day we can not live there,Add an article
the environment
becouse
life Correct your spelling
because
is
end and Oxygen Verb problem
will
also
decrease on the Earth. Another significant way by which this
problem
can be tackled is that If people
continue to throw waste at
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on
Add an article
the street
street
, Fix the agreement mistake
streets
government
should Add an article
the government
to
punishment for Change preposition
apply
community
.Add an article
the community
For example
, less their salary or clean the streets.
To conclude
,although
environmental footprint are serious problem
that is
creating many negative effects, it can be addressed with the solutions that have been mentioned is
previous paragraphs. From my point of view, in order to tackle Correct your spelling
in
this
problem
, government
and residents should Correct article usage
the government
be
pay attention to low and need to Unnecessary verb
apply
be
a closer connection to nature.Verb problem
have
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grammar
Work on sentence structure and grammar to reduce errors and improve readability. For example, 'it bring a lot of diseases and the Azone erriosion' should be 'it brings a lot of diseases and ozone layer erosion.'
vocabulary
Use a wider range of vocabulary and phrases to avoid repetition and improve overall writing quality. For instance, instead of repeatedly saying 'people should,' consider alternative expressions such as 'individuals must' or 'citizens ought to.'
clarity
Develop your ideas more clearly. For instance, elaborate on how increased rubbish bins can solve the problem and provide specific examples or case studies.
structure
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task understanding
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