The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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report derives from the above maps which enumerate the Happy Valley Shopping
Centre
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between 1982 and 2012, and the changes that occurred throughout
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period. As an initial overview,
it is clear that
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the main change for 2012 involved demolishing the lake, so the
centre
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expanded. Not only is
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point clear, but
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a parking lot was constructed which is situated in the bottom left of the shopping
centre
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. Notably, the location of the entrance, elevator, entertainment area, and washrooms remained unchanged in 2012;
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, there are two facilities that have been destroyed namely, the lobby and the cafe.
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, the furniture retail was expanded, as it was located in the additional space that had been provided after demolishing the lake.
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, the stores which were on the right side of the
centre
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divided into four
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of three, three of them were eateries and the
last
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one was a food
store
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.
Next,
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the sports
store
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and the electronics
store
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were relocated and became in the area that the food
store
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used to be in.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, store with synonyms.
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