The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
report derives from the above maps which enumerate the Happy Valley Shopping Centre
between 1982 and 2012, and the changes that occurred throughout this
period.
As an initial overview, it is clear that
the main change for 2012 involved demolishing the lake, so the centre
expanded. Not only is this
point clear, but also
a parking lot was constructed which is situated in the bottom left of the shopping centre
.
Notably, the location of the entrance, elevator, entertainment area, and washrooms remained unchanged in 2012; nevertheless
, there are two facilities that have been destroyed namely, the lobby and the cafe. Additionally
, the furniture retail was expanded, as it was located in the additional space that had been provided after demolishing the lake.
Moreover
, the stores which were on the right side of the centre
have been
divided into four Wrong verb form
were
instead
of three, three of them were eateries and the last
one was a food store
. Next,
the sports store
and the electronics store
were relocated and became in the area that the food store
used to be in.Submitted by mariameissa23 on
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