The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
report derives from the above maps which enumerate the Happy Valley Shopping
Centre
between 1982 and 2012, and the changes that occurred throughout
this
period. As an initial overview,
it is clear that
the main change for 2012 involved demolishing the lake, so the
centre
expanded. Not only is
this
point clear, but
also
a parking lot was constructed which is situated in the bottom left of the shopping
centre
. Notably, the location of the entrance, elevator, entertainment area, and washrooms remained unchanged in 2012;
nevertheless
, there are two facilities that have been destroyed namely, the lobby and the cafe.
Additionally
, the furniture retail was expanded, as it was located in the additional space that had been provided after demolishing the lake.
Moreover
, the stores which were on the right side of the
centre
have been
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were
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divided into four
instead
of three, three of them were eateries and the
last
one was a food
store
.
Next,
the sports
store
and the electronics
store
were relocated and became in the area that the food
store
used to be in.
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