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and 8 The graph below shows the percentage of households with diferent kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information bselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words

and 8 The graph below shows the percentage of households with diferent kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information bselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of a variety of devices washing
mechine
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machines
,
computer
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computers
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,
phone
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phones
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 and
DVDplayers
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DVD players
 in
USA
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the USA
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 from 1995 to 1999.
Overall
,it can
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be
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 seen the
higest precentage
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highest percentage
of households is
washing
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the washing
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mechine
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machine
 it started in figure 60 in 1995 to
ened
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ended
 with 80 in 1999.the
secnd comeing
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second coming
phone
grow
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graduly
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gradually
in
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rate
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a rate
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20
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 and still
decrased
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decreased
 to 70 in the
last
 period
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smaller
 the computer devices
growth
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.
On the other hand
 ,
DVD
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the DVD
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 player
the
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 lowest increased
between
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among
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 the other
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device
devices
deviced
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devices
it
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recorded
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recorded
in 40
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figure
figrue
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figures
respectivelly
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respectively
 of
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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 from 1996 to 1999,
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