The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparis, who were climbing up calmly, with spantanious surges.ons where relevant.
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The given line graph shows the
number
of undergraduates in Australia from four Asian states namely Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia, and Singapore
during almost two decades starting from 1982 until 2000.
Overall
, the progressive upward trend was recorded in all countries with constant fluctuation to both positive and negative sides, while
Singapore
demonstrated moderate growth only.
Focusing on unstable figures, initially
, Indonesia presented the largest rise within the given span. Starting from less than a thousand students number
, Indonesia showed a boom of scholars between 1986 and 1988 till 1998, when this
anomaly dropped down and started its improvement again. Malaysia and Hong Kong projected the same result at the end
of the statistics; however
, the origins were completely different from each other. The huge difference could not prevent Hong Kong learners from catching up with Malaysian peers, who were climbing up calmly, with spontaneous surges. Nevertheless
, a decline by
approximately 5000 students was recorded Change preposition
of
at the end
of 1996 in both countries.
Conversely
, the number
of Singapore
international applicants increased for
20000 throughout the whole period, being the only country to do so consistently, without any jumps. Change preposition
by
Initially
, starting with a minimum, they reached the mark of 10000 only in 1995, while
other countries did this
earlier. In addition
, in the last
year of the chart, Singapore
finished in second place by number
of students narrowly below 20000.Submitted by Umar on
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