This graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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cities

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city's

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population’s

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population

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percentage

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percentages

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in four Asian

countries

including

Philippines

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the Philippines

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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia

throughout

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1970-2020 and forecasts for 2030 and 2040. Out of four

countries

, Malaysia and Indonesia facing the same trend. These

countries

’s

cities

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cities'

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population

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populations

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had facing

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gradual

increase

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increases

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throughout the year starting from 30% and 10% respectively, and forecasted

to

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80% and 40%

out

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of

nation’s

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the nation’s

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population

stays

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in the city in 2040.

Differ

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from those

countries

,

Philiphines

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Philippines

metropolitan’s

citizen

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citizens

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fluctuate from year to year especially from 1970 to 2010, but different trends will

occured

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occur

occurred

on

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from

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2020 to 2040 which country’s

population

started

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to gain to more than twice of first year’s

population

. Following

by

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three other

countries

, Thailand faced

stagnant

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a stagnant

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slope of

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the population

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at

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the first place

around

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19%,

hence

, it eventually uphill starting from 2020 and based on the forecast it will have

significant

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increase in the next 20 years to 35%.