This graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph tells the cities
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population
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percentages
countries
including Philippines
, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia Correct article usage
the Philippines
throughout
1970-2020 and forecasts for 2030 and 2040. Out of four Change preposition
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countries
, Malaysia and Indonesia facing the same trend. These countries
’s cities
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population
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populations
had facing
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increase
throughout the year starting from 30% and 10% respectively, and forecasted Fix the agreement mistake
increases
to
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nation’s
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the nation’s
population
stays
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will stay
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countries
, Philiphines
metropolitan’s Correct your spelling
Philippines
citizen
fluctuate from year to year especially from 1970 to 2010, but different trends will Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
occured
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occur
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on
2020 to 2040 which country’s Change preposition
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population
started
to gain to more than twice of first year’s Wrong verb form
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population
. Following by
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countries
, Thailand faced stagnant
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a stagnant
population
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the population
at
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around
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hence
, it eventually uphill starting from 2020 and based on the forecast it will have significant
increase in the next 20 years to 35%.Add an article
a significant
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