You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with my missed
flight
due to
the airport
's technical fault.
Last
week, I was travelling from Ottawa to Calgary and I had a connecting flight
via Toronto. I was told at Ottawa Airport
, I
Correct word choice
that I
will
have to collect my luggage and load it again at Toronto Wrong verb form
would
Airport
. After reaching Toronto, the baggage claim staff told me that they decided to transfer the luggage directly to the next airplane
without any prior notice.
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aeroplane
However
, I was trying to find my luggage for 2 hours and due to
that, I missed my flight
. I was travelling to attend a wedding and due to
this
mismanagement, I missed my flight
and I was not able to reach Calgary. That wedding was very important for me.
Hence
, I would request for
compensation as it was not my fault, I missed my Change preposition
apply
flight
due to
the airport
's mismanagement. Also
, I missed an important event.
Waiting to hear back from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tirth TSubmitted by tirththakkar23 on
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Sentence variety
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Vocabulary Range
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Structure
The logical structure of the letter is well-organized, with each paragraph addressing a different aspect of the situation clearly.
Tone
You've maintained a suitable tone throughout, striking a balance between formality and expressing your frustrations and request politely.
Greeting and Closing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite