The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
The diagram compares the amount of people who travel by
undergraund
station in London.
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underground
Overall
, during that day period, at 8 o'clock remained the biggest degree of passengers in Linking Words
station
, with all other Correct article usage
the station
differrent
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different
time
spending much less on them.
From 8 o'clock to 10 Fix the agreement mistake
times
number
of passengers dropped suddenly, Correct article usage
the number
however
with each hour rose gradually. At 06:00 and 16:00 shown the lowest index with 100 travelers, Linking Words
while
at 18:00 climbed sharply to the 370 commuters, Linking Words
as well as
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this
period of time that displayed dramatic changes. It is intersting to note that there was no similarity in the number of people anywhere and the trend was upward.
As can be seen from the graph, the amount of farepayers most of time was increased, but rose the most significant at morning and after midnight. The data highlights significant fluctuations in passenger numbers throughout the day, with peak travel times occurring in the morning and evening, Linking Words
while
showing a clear upward trend in the number of travelers during these periods.Linking Words
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