The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other's countries in 2011.
The following diagram compares
amount
of Add an article
the amount
people
from five different country
in Europe living in each other's state in 2011.
Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
, during this
one-year period, Germany
remained
the highest index, Italian nations show the Verb problem
had
number
of people
who live in Germany
, as well as
on
Change preposition
in
the
second place the degree of Correct article usage
apply
people
Polish people
live
in Britain. In Polish all statements Wrong verb form
living
shows
the lowest indicators with Correct subject-verb agreement
show
total
Correct article usage
a total
number
six
thousand Change preposition
of six
people
.
It is interesting to note that the total number
whose
lived abroad only Polish nation was higher Correct pronoun usage
who
one
million. Change preposition
than one
However
, there were only a small number
of people
from another country
who Fix the agreement mistake
other countries
live
in Poland complete degree was 6000 Wrong verb form
lived
people
. The gap in spending between this
5 states had widened and considerably more public were live in Correct determiner usage
these
Germany
summary 1198000.
As can be seen from the graph, the amount of rate was 3298000 humanity. The basis of the table consisted only of Germany
and Britain due to
their accrual.Submitted by dnm.best on
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