The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart, which depicts great detail, illustrates the revolution of the maximum proportion of Asian
elephants
from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
, it can be observed that elephants
in India experienced the greatest deterioration throughout the 13-year period, whereas
Laos' elephants
remained constant over the given timeline.
Diving deeper, in 1997, the population of this
type of mammal in India was almost 10000, making it the highest figure in the chart, though it decreased to 7500 in 2004. Malaysia and Thailand also
followed a similar trend as India, with a reduction of 2000 elephants
respectively in the final year. Additionally
, Cambodia was the only nation that saw a minor escalation over the 13-year period, with approximately 1200 to 1400 elephants
.
Turning to Myanmar, Sri Lanka, and China, all had minor declines in the proportion of elephants
, dropping from around 500. However
, Vietnam's elephants
had the most marginal decrease compared to others, around 1200 to 1100. Finally
, with regard to Laos, there was no change in the number of elephants
and it stayed at just above 1000.Submitted by maisarahamirah16 on
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