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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts information about the annual salary of the
quantity
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number
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 of
households
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 in the US in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, The US
families
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, which earned over 100,000
USD
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, were the most popular in 2007 and 2015meanwhile, the group of
households
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 that earned 75,000 to 99,999
USD
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 was the least popular in three research years. First and foremost, there were nearly 30
million
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families
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 had income over 100,000
USD
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, which
also
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 was the most popular
in
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among
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 the five observation groups. 5 years later, the highest income of US
households
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 decreased slightly approximately 2
million
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families
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, which was similar to the failure of the group earned from 75000 to 99999 about 1
million
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families
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.
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, other groups rose gradually from 1 to 4
million
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households
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.
Families
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, which had salaries from 25,000 to 49,999
USD
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, became the most popular at 30
million
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households
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 in 2011.
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 but not least, the highest salary group went up
considerablely
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considerably
 to 33
million
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households
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, which returned to become the most popular in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, families, usd, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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