You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Alex, I am writing to inform you that I looking for the best people for my house. The next Monday, I have a birthday and I would like to see you at my party! The main, I must tell you about the address.

This

house is

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18 Mira

street

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Sosnovoborsk City. It is not far from you,

that is

why I recommended to use a taxi. Do not worry, I will pay for you. Call me when you coming to me. Before you go, you should wear a special costume. My party has a dress code. We will be superheroes! In the mall like Planeta has many good stores,

for example

, New Yorker, Zara etc. You can buy things that you need for my birthday there. I would be grateful if you visited me and we had a good time together

likewise

when we were young. Your Best friend, Vladimir

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task achievement

Ensure consistency in verb tenses. For example, in the first paragraph, 'I am looking' can be more coherent as 'I am planning'.

coherence cohesion

Divide the content into separate paragraphs for easier readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate and friendly, fitting the tone of a letter to a friend.

task achievement

You included all the necessary information: the reason for the party, directions, and dress code requirements.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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The Closing

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