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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

#party #friend #city #directions #venue
Dear Alex, I am writing to inform you that I looking for the best people for my house. The next Monday, I have a birthday and I would like to see you at my party! The main, I must tell you about the address.
This
 house is
in
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at
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 18 Mira
street
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Street
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 Sosnovoborsk City. It is not far from you,
that is
 why I recommended to use a taxi. Do not worry, I will pay for you. Call me when you coming to me. Before you go, you should wear a special costume. My party has a dress code. We will be superheroes! In the mall like Planeta has many good stores,
for example
, New Yorker, Zara etc. You can buy things that you need for my birthday there. I would be grateful if you visited me and we had a good time together
likewise
 when we were young. Your Best friend, Vladimir
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task achievement
Ensure consistency in verb tenses. For example, in the first paragraph, 'I am looking' can be more coherent as 'I am planning'.
coherence cohesion
Divide the content into separate paragraphs for easier readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and friendly, fitting the tone of a letter to a friend.
task achievement
You included all the necessary information: the reason for the party, directions, and dress code requirements.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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