The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The table illustrates, the counts of
visitors
to Ashdown Museum in the years before and after development. The pie chart displays the responses to visitors
' satisfaction.
Overall
, in the survey
they gave five types of options to Add a comma
survey,
visitors
, In comparison with before progress the high number of crowds visited the museum after the development and also
the majority of people
were satisfied with the new progress.
According to
the first chart, 30% of people
satisfied
Add a missing verb
were satisfied
while
, 40% of people
were dissatisfied, which is the highest response in the survey
. Moreover
, Very satisfied and Very dissatisfied were 15% and 10% respectively. However
, there were 5% of people
did not respond to the survey
.
Secondly
, after the renovation 75% of tourists were satisfied with the museum, in comparison with before refurbished it increased by 30%. Further
, the percentage of dissatisfied was decreased by 25%. On the other hand
, very satisfied and no response to the survey
proportions are equal. Finally
, during the year after the renovation, the visitors
' count was increased to 18,000.Submitted by shruthiudhai7 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, survey, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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