The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graphs illustrate the differences in ownership of electrical machines and the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
hours
spent on housework in Use synonyms
households
in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
percentage
of all three appliances used by Use synonyms
households
increased significantly. Use synonyms
While
the amount of time per household decreased gradually over the entire period.
In terms of electrical appliances, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
households
Use synonyms
used
refrigerators grew dramatically from 0% to 80% in 1960, Correct pronoun usage
that used
by
2019 it had increased to 100%. Correct word choice
and by
While
the Linking Words
percentage
of washing machines used by Use synonyms
households
started at 40% which is more than the Use synonyms
percentage
of vacuum cleaners it was around 30%, but by 1980, it had changed to ( under 70% and about 80% respectively). In the Use synonyms
last
year, the number of people who used vacuum cleaners was similar to refrigerators about exactly 100%, Linking Words
whereas
the Linking Words
percentage
of individuals Use synonyms
used
washing machines reached just above 70%.
Correct pronoun usage
who used
On the other hand
, the number of Linking Words
hours
of housework per week and per person started at 50 Use synonyms
hours
per week in 1920, Use synonyms
then
it dropped gradually to 10 Linking Words
hours
in 2019.Use synonyms
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