A friend has told you that he or she feels lonely in their new city away from their family. Write a letter to your friend, and -Explain why people can feel this way -Give some ideas on how to solve the problem - Ask your friend to contact you and tell you if this works
Dear Roman,
I am very glad that you have
finally
moved to Tashkent. However
, your friend told me that you don't feel well in another place. I understand you, being away from home without friends and family is very sad. You're uncomfortable and sometimes you ask yourself maybe you have made a mistake. This
is an
often occurrence for many migrants.
I'll try to give you some tips to cheer you up. Correct article usage
a
First,
find something to do to distract yourself from bad thoughts. For example
, explore the city, find
places where you can have a pleasant and quality time. After all, your girlfriend and your dog are coming to visit you soon! Correct word choice
and find
Secondly
, get to know your colleagues or neighbours, maybe they are good guys and you will easily find a common language. It will distract you from your sadness. And finally
, you can contact me on Skype at any time, I will always answer you.
Contact me later, I want to know if my advice has helped you. If that is
not enough, then
we will discuss other actions. Don't worry about your girlfriend, I look after her and visit her often at any time.
Be careful and all the best,
VladSubmitted by samedovateacher on
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider using more linking words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. This will ensure a smoother flow of information.
task achievement
Though your task achievement is strong, you might want to add a bit more detail in your suggestions. Descriptions can be more specific, which will make your advice more actionable and helpful.
task achievement
You've done an excellent job in addressing all three tasks (explaining why people can feel lonely, giving solutions, and asking for a follow-up).
task achievement
Your tone is very friendly and supportive, which is perfectly suitable for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
You’ve maintained a logical structure and clear paragraphing. Each paragraph addresses a specific part of the task which makes the letter easy to read and understand.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and natural, providing a personal touch to your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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