The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The line graph displays the count of tourists staying on
cruise
ships or land
during their visit to the Caribbean Islands from 2010 to 2017. Also
, it contains the record of total tourist visits during this
time frame.
Overall
, the total count of people visiting the island gradually increased over the time period from 2010 to 2017. Even though tourists opting to stay on land
was initially
high in 2010 eventually cruise
ships gained attraction from the visitors resulting in a high inflow compared to land
staying in 2017.
In 2010, the number of people who preferred staying on the land
was around 0.7 million
which remained almost the same over the following year 2011. Whereas
visitors staying on cruise
ship
was below 0.5 Fix the agreement mistake
ships
million
in 2010 but in the following year there was an increment reaching almost 0.5 million
. The total count to the Caribbean Island seems to have steadily increased since 2010 reaching 1.5 million
in 2012.
Even though there was a slight fluctuation from 2011 to 2013 in opting for cruise
ships to stay there was a significant boost seen from 0.5 million
in 2013 to around 2 million
in 2017. In contrast
, there was a modest increase of approximately 0.7 million
in 2011 to reach 1.5 million
in 2013 which will be the highest point ever reached over any time period. But this
number was considerably the same till 2015 and then
there was a dip in 2016 and a rise in the following year reaching 1.5 million
. Regardless of people opting for either place to stay the visit total soured up reaching around 3.5 million
in 2017.Submitted by nlchiranth11 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cruise, land, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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