Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
letter regarding a jacket
which I left at your cinema complex in room number 6 a couple of days ago.
I wanted to let you know that I visited your movie theatre on Friday to watch the movie RDX-2, wearing a blue leather jacket
. This
blue jacket
has pink fur on the neckline and two pockets at the front. Apart from
this
, it is reversible and changes colour in red light. Interestingly, I got a nice compliment from the receptionist on that day.
Additionally
, I booked tickets online for movies but did not select the seat number. Therefore
, I was seated on seat number A12 by a helper. it was on the first row and near entrance 2.
Moreover
, the Seats were very comfortable and had a long pocket to keep belongings, where I put my jacket
.
I hope you would
be able to locate my Wrong verb form
will
jacket
on the chair or lost and find section. However
, it was not crowded on that day so less possibility of stealing.
Could you please call me on 1234564433 if you get my jacket
? I will drive it up at your convenience.
I would be thankful for your kind response.
Regards,
PaermSubmitted by parminderbitti3 on
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Grammar
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Word Choice
The letter can benefit from slight improvements in word choice and sentence structure to enhance readability.
Content
The letter clearly describes the jacket, seating location, and what action you want to be taken.
Structure
Paragraphs follow a logical flow and each focuses on a specific aspect.
Tone
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the audience.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.