The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Revenue Sources Donated Food 86.6% Other Income 0.4% Expenditures Program Services 95.8% Government Community Investment Grants 0.2% Contributions Income Fundraising 2.6% 10.4% Program 0.2% Management and General Revenue 2.2% Total $53,561,580 1.6% Total $53,224,896

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that the revenue sources total amount higher than the expenditures.

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we can see that donated food and

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up the biggest parts of each pie. In more

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sources , donated food just over

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of the total at 86.6 per cent .

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, Community contributions take the

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ten point four

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percentage is 2.2% by

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to the lowest number , other

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%.

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, investment income and

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grants both have zero dot two per cent .

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, more than 95% of the expenditures are

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.

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and general by one number , it's 1.6%

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, we could say that donated food and

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services have the highest amount .

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and management and general are the smallest , each under 2%.