The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The two maps illustrate the current layout of an industrial zone in the town of Norbiton
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and its development plan in the future.
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Overall
, this
area is going to undergo many significant transformations including the relocation and new constructions.
Having looked at the first map, we can see that factories were erected around the roundabout and two sites on the main street to the east. In the long run, they will be demolished and replaced by plenty of houses. Besides
that, the farmland which used to be located in the north will be moved to the east and pave the way for new land purposes.
In terms of location, we can see that many amenities are constructed. In particular
, a new school is going to be built at the end
of the road in the east. Moreover
, shops and a medical centre are expected to be erected near the bigger roundabout. Also
, a bridge is going to be constructed across the river so locals can travel to the new residential area conveniently.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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