Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many big cities are suffering housing problems. They cannot provide enough space for new
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from
houses
. Some governments think that to tackle this
problem, They should reassign park land
for residential progress because Correct your spelling
parkland
this
park land
might be better for new buildings. I agree with that because Correct your spelling
parkland
park
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parklands
lands
have more green and most of them are located in central areas
.
Parklands have more foliages than other parts of the city. If people want to make new homes or buildings they should make it greenery to tackle air pollution and also
improve people's lives. For instance
, If they want to make homes in to countryside
most of the places in the countryside
are arid lands
. They cannot make everywhere green. However
, If they decide to make these houses
in park
areas
. They do not have to make everywhere green they can plant some trees and bushes. Hence
, building houses
in park
areas
will make it easier for people to make it green and these green places improve the quality of air.
Furthermore
, Park
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Parklands
lands
are mostly located in central areas
. This
location may be an advantage for workers. For example
, If their workplaces are located in central areas
, making their home to
the Change preposition
in
countryside
is not a good solution for them because they may have an issue with transportation. Nevertheless
, Due to
the park
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parklands
lands
location in the city centre, individuals can went
their Change the verb form
go
works
easier and cheaper than Fix the agreement mistake
work
countryside
hosts.
To sum up
, Some local governments believe that park
areas
should be reassigned for housing. I agree with that suggestion because making these houses
for park
areas
may improve air quality due to
greens and also
workers want their homes located in central places because they do not want to make their transportation harder.Submitted by taylanpolat6124 on
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Clarify how the advantages of building on park land outweigh the possible disadvantages to strengthen your argument.
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