The graph below shows home heating fuel choice according to the year the house was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates home heating fuels choice consist of electricity and natural
gas
when the year the house was built.
From my overall
perspective, it can be seen that electricity was
dramatically jumped over 60 years, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
natural gas
decreased.
To begin
with, before 1950, the popularity of houses using electricity was 15%, then
increased gradually around
45% between 1990 and 2010 because of technological advancements.
Change preposition
to around
On the other hand
, the population who chose natural gas
for house building fluctuated.
Furthermore
, the percentage of customers that used natural gas
remained the same between 1950 and 1969 at 60%, then
decreased to approximately 45% from 1970 to 1989, and stayed until 1990 to 2010.Submitted by napatnp18065322 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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