The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.
The bar chart provided
a
different categories, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
carbohydrates
, protein,and fat,which as
average Correct your spelling
an
diet
, a healthy diet
and a healthy diet
for sport
. This
report will discusse
and Correct your spelling
discuss
analysis
Replace the word
analyse
the
both Remove the article
apply
side
.
Fix the agreement mistake
sides
Overall
, carbohydrates
was
the highest in the three aspects, Change the verb form
were
Although
the fast was the lowest in three
areas.
Correct article usage
the three
According to
overhead, fast was the lowest in the healthy diet
for sport
with percentage
Correct article usage
a percentage
15
%, rather than Change preposition
of 15
was remain
steady in the two aspects average Wrong verb form
remained
diet
, healthy diet
by 20%. Otherwise
Add a comma
Otherwise,
carbohydrates
was
in the healthy Change the verb form
were
diet
for sport
with 60%, as an illustration
the two factors Add the comma(s)
illustration,
was
40% in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
healthy
Correct article usage
the healthy
diet
, also
decline
10% in the other area.
Change the form of the verb
declined
On the other hand
, the
proteinCorrect article usage
apply
take
Change the verb form
takes
the
second place in Correct article usage
apply
healthy
Add an article
a healthy
diet
by 30%, although
in
the average Change preposition
apply
diet
graduallly
Correct your spelling
gradually
increase
an amount Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
10
%, Change preposition
by 10
therefore
take
third place in Wrong verb form
taking
healthy
Add an article
a healthy
diet
for sport
by fell
15%. In the final Verb problem
apply
carbohydrates
take the peak in three areas.Submitted by rahafabinsaif on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbohydrates, diet, sport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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