The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.

The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport.
The bar chart provided
a
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different categories,
carbohydrates
, protein,and fat,which
as
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an
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average
diet
, a healthy
diet
and a healthy
diet
for
sport
.
This
report will
discusse
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discuss
and
analysis
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the
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both
side
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.
Overall
,
carbohydrates
was
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the highest in the three aspects,
Although
the fast was the lowest in
three
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areas.
According to
overhead, fast was the lowest in the healthy
diet
for
sport
with
percentage
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a percentage
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15
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%, rather than
was remain
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steady in the two aspects average
diet
, healthy
diet
by 20%.
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carbohydrates
was
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were
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in the healthy
diet
for
sport
with 60%, as an
illustration
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the two factors
was
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were
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40% in
healthy
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the healthy
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diet
,
also
decline
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10% in the other area.
On the other hand
,
the
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protein
take
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the
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second place in
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
by 30%,
although
in
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the average
diet
graduallly
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gradually
increase
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increases
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an amount
10
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by 10
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%,
therefore
take
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taking
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third place in
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
for
sport
by
fell
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15%. In the final
carbohydrates
take the peak in three areas.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbohydrates, diet, sport with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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