It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them with this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviors to children?

It is essential part for
children
to understand the worg and the righ behaviours from
such
young age,punishment could be
use
to help them realize their mistakes,their are a lot of tipes of
punishments
and not all of them would be helpful for
children
,In mi opinion,young people shoud understand the right and the wrong methods to do thing,
also
it is hard for them to learn how to behave when they get older,
while
The
parents
could sometimes handle the way their
children
behave stranger will get upset easily by them,How ever their a certain type of human love childrens,the education process needs to start from
such
a young age accroding to exprets,people with young age are more likely to learn compare with adults,
while
there are experts encouraging using
punishments
for bad behaves they are other devoting to handle the situation with other methods,
for example
like talking with the child or make them fix what the done wrong,If a child learn how to adjust their mistakse and fix them why should
parents
use
punishments
?
However
not all
children
capable
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of that,there are some young people
do
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who do
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not listen to their
parents
,So there is a
scal
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scale
for allowed
punishments
to
use
with them,
for example
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their phone away,
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off the tv and
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them fix what they did wrong,
although
not all the
punishments
should be
allowd
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allowed
and not all of them could solve the issues,
Parents
have to
br
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be
carful
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with the way they punish their
children
so that they could handle the problems without making a new
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,
to sum
up
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parents
should teach their child how to act,
also
they need to put
strong
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a strong
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line between good and bad behaviour,Punishment could
be
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use
only if they were needed,Not all punishment could be allowed to
use
.
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