The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The two maps display the Kimsville
town
's recent changes in 2002 and the present day.
Overall
, by looking at the two maps it is clear that
Kimsville town
was greener in 2002. Over the period, the town
was totally transformed with the addition of new buildings; however
, the north-east and the south-east appear to have been relatively unchanged.
The trees in the north-west of the town
were cleared and new apartments were developed. The shopping center
which is located in the north of the Change the spelling
centre
city
center
remained the same. The factory which is located in the east of the Change the spelling
centre
city
was demolished and replaced with a software company.
To the west of the city
Change the spelling
centre
center
a new train station was constructed. The old cinema which is in the south of the Add a comma
center,
city
center
was converted Change the spelling
centre
to
a pub. In the south-west, trees were Change preposition
into
cut-down
and a football stadium was developed.Correct your spelling
cut down
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