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The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie charts demonstrate data on the population ages of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and speculations for 2050.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the majority of Italian people are 15 to 59
years
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 old. Meanwhile, the
group
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 above 60
years
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 old is observed as the smallest number in Yemen's population. Regarding Italy, in 2000, the population of the 15 to 59
years
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 old
group
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 accounted for 61.6%. It is expected to decline to 46.2% in the next 50
years
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.
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, the number of the 0 to 14-year-old
years
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group
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 is projected to drop by roughly 3% to 11.5% in 2050.
On the contrary
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, the figure for the above 60-year-old
years
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group
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 will increase significantly from 24.1% in 2000 to 42.3% in 2050. Turning to Yemen, the proportion of people in the 15 to 59-year-old
years
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group
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 is predicted to rise from 46.3% in 2000 to 57.3% in 2050. The percentage of the above 60-year-old
years
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group
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 is anticipated to grow by nearly 2% to 5.7% in 2050,
whereas
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 the figure for the 0 to 14-year-old
years
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group
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 will fall to 37% in the same period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Age structure
  • Dependency ratio
  • Life expectancy
  • Birth rate
  • Socioeconomic development
  • Projections
  • Developing country
  • Developed country
  • Youthful population
  • Aged population
  • Population aging
  • Pension systems
  • Healthcare services
  • Economic conditions
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