The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.
The chart shows a contraction of young individuals' options in various aspects
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Europe,the upcoming couple of decades
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Overall
, as stated by the survey, youngsters believe almost all aspects will get worse, except interpersonal communication would enhanced.
In the survey, more young participants Linking Words
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communication among the people would improve Wrong verb form
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others share their negative opinions, respectively 54 % and 46%. In spite of more youngster-supported communication. More and more responders are pessimistic about the Linking Words
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of air getting worse only a small percentage of them are optimistic about it, respectively 77% and 23%.
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of food is a challenging topic because half of youngster says Use synonyms
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of meal will improve in future, Meanwhile, other half says Use synonyms
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foods will get worse than now, their percentage respectively 49% and 51%. SimilarityUse synonyms
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occurred about health majority of young anticipated that the health system would be bad, Remove the comma
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3 out 5 participants Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improve" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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