The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.

The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.
The chart shows a contraction of young individuals' options in various aspects
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Europe,the upcoming couple of decades
Overall
, as stated by the survey, youngsters believe almost all aspects will get worse, except interpersonal communication would enhanced. In the survey, more young participants
are expecting
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communication among the people would improve
while
others share their negative opinions, respectively 54 % and 46%. In spite of more youngster-supported communication. More and more responders are pessimistic about the
quality
of air getting worse only a small percentage of them are optimistic about it, respectively 77% and 23%. Options on
quality
of food is a challenging topic because half of youngster says
quality
of meal will improve in future, Meanwhile, other half says
quality
foods will get worse than now, their percentage respectively 49% and 51%. Similarity
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occurred about health majority of young anticipated that the health system would be bad,
While
3 out 5 participants
are
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were
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optimistic about
this
aspect.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words quality with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improve" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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