You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do
Dear Aman,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter regarding my which I left at your home last
week.
It was an enjoyable experience being with you and your lovely family. I am thankful for your hospitality and warm welcome. I loved the food your mother cooked for us; the taste was delicious and still on my tongue.
However
, I realised later that I had left my watch at your house, as my train was ahead of its schedule and I was in a hurry. It would be in the guest room, where I stayed.
It is an Apple smart watch series 5, having a rectangle dial and black strips. It is very precious to me, gifted by my father on my last
birthday.
I think it would be still in the guest room on the dressing table. Could you please locate it and mail it to me at my address? I will pay the mailing charges.
If you are unable to mail it please call me, and I will drive to pick it up.
I will be waiting for your response.
Regards,
ParmSubmitted by parminderbitti3 on
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correction
In the first sentence, you wrote 'regarding my which I left,' which is missing the word 'watch.' It should be 'regarding my watch, which I left.'
advice
Consider varying sentence structure to enhance the natural flow. For example, use complex sentences with conjunctions to connect related ideas.
writing tone
The letter has a friendly and polite tone, perfect for communication with a friend.
content
You provided a clear description of your watch, including its sentimental value.
logical structure
The letter follows a logical structure with a clear opening, body, and closing.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.