The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting the relevant and main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting the relevant and main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line
chart
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shows the percentage of households with electrical appliances in one country over around a century from 1920 to 2019. The second line
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illustrates the number of
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of housework per
week
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and household in the same period and country.
Overall
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, the two charts represent a contrary trend during the period from 1920 to 2019.
Firstly
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, in the top
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, the usage rate of washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners increased gradually,
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, the below
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presents a downward trend.
To begin
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with,
although
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only 5% of households used refrigerators in 1920,
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percentage surged and made up 100% in 1980. The usage of vacuum cleaners followed, showing a steady increase from 30% to 100% between 1920 and 2000. As for washing machines in 1920, they accounted for the highest proportion (40%) compared with the other appliances;
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, they fluctuated between 1940 and 2000 and ultimately comprised approximately 65% in 2019. Looking at the below
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in detail, in 1920, there constituted the highest rate (50
hours
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per
week
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) in the
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.
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, the proportion plummeted to 20
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per
week
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in 1960 and represented a steady decrease until 2019 (roughly 10
hours
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per
week
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, hours, week with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • household
  • percentage
  • refrigerator
  • vacuum cleaner
  • washing machine
  • steady increase
  • significant decrease
  • correlation
  • housework
  • number of hours
  • per week
  • period
  • rise
  • reach
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