More and more people are leaving countryside to live in cities. Do more advantages or disadvantages of this development for environment.
In recent times,
influx
Correct article usage
an influx
people
Change preposition
of people
are
Verb problem
has
moving
from rural to urban Wrong verb form
moved
areas
. Although
, relocating to cities have
some downsides, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
However
, I believe advantages
Correct article usage
the advantages
overweigh
the disadvantages of Verb problem
outweigh
this
trend as now will be explained.
To commence with, moving to cities can majorly upgrade standard
of living of residents. Urban Add an article
the standard
areas
provide all amenities
required to live in Correct article usage
the amenities
this
advanced technological world. For instance
, parents these days do not hesitate to move their children for higher education in cities as it is believed that educational institutes situated in urban areas
are far more reputed. Consequently
, it enables high
literacy rate and employment rate. Correct article usage
a high
Moreover
, better
style of living Correct article usage
a better
such
as medical facilities, waste and waste disposal, rich infrastructure and good
transport system can be expected Correct article usage
a good
while
living in metropolitan areas
. Another benefit of moving can be vast companies offering employment opportunities.
On the contrary
, there are some downsides also
. Large people relocating to urban areas
cause heavy population and traffic jams. Need
to Correct article usage
The need
expansion of
urban Wrong verb form
expand
areas
due to
increase
in population is directly associated with land cutting and deforestation. Correct article usage
the increase
Such
activities have become debatable issues these days and harm the environment and mother earth
. Correct your spelling
Mother Earth
Also
, disruption to nature causes many diseases and other related environmental issues on which government
needs to take strict actions. Correct article usage
the government
For instance
, these urban areas
have become heavily crowded and people go back to countryside areas
to get
relax from the chaos which may not be available very soon in future.
Verb problem
apply
To conclude
this
, though there are some downsides of
Change preposition
to
this
trend, In my opinion, merits have an edge over demerits and the considerable reason for this
can be access to a better and high
standard of living by residents.Correct word choice
higher
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