The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart describes the leisure activities of
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,
American
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,
Turkish
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and
Brazilian
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tourists
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in Greece during their holiday in August 2019. The information is shown in averages of
hours
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spent on leisure activities per
day
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.
Overall
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Chinese
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and
American
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tourists
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prefer to read books on their holiday
while
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Turkish
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and
Brazilian
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tourists
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choose to be on the beach. All
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spent the smallest part of their
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visiting other places. The
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and
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tourists
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show the same trend in terms of spending the most time
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reading books and the least on visiting places.
However
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,
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tourists
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read 75% of their
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and
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tourists
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around 40%.
Turkish
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and
Brazilian
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tourists
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prefer doing the same leisure activities during their
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. Both groups spent 4
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a
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reading books.
Brazilian
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tourists
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are just 1 hour longer at the beach than
Turkish
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tourists
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, 6
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and 5
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respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chinese, american, turkish, brazilian, tourists, hours, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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