The graph shows the income of four restaurants in Cambridge in 2016.

The graph shows the income of four restaurants in Cambridge in 2016.
The line graph illustrates the
income
of four different
restaurants
in Cambridge in 2016.
According to
the graphic presentation, the incomes of all four
restaurants
fluctuated significantly throughout the
year
. The Old
Hall
has the most stable
income
among all
restaurants
.
Also
, all three
restaurants
, except The Grosvenor, ended the
year
with a profit in their
income
. If we analyse the data, we see that The Grosvenor started the
year
with the highest
income
and that continued to decrease over the
year
.
However
, The Old
Hall
's
income
increased throughout the
year
, except between April and July, because in those four months, The Old
Hall
's
income
stayed the same.
Moreover
, The Old
Hall
is the only restaurant that keeps its
income
the same as
last
month. When it comes to The Pizza House and The Taj Mahal, they had sharp increases all over the
year
, they
also
peaked at 120.000 and 190.000 pounds.
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