The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate the changes that took place at the seaside
resort
of Templeton between 2000 and 2013.
Overall
, the
resort
underwent significant development, including the addition of new buildings, a supermarket, a hospital, a school, and an expansion of the railway system over the 13-year period. In 2000, the east side of Templeton featured a hospital, a school, a car park, and several
houses
scattered around an intersection surrounded by trees. The railway station was situated in the central part of the
resort
, with two buildings nearby. By 2013, the
houses
near the hospital had been relocated to a new residential area adjacent to the hospital, and the intersection area was cleared to make room for new developments.
Additionally
, a railroad was extended to connect the east and west parts of the
resort
, and a factory was constructed in the previously forested area. On the west side, there was
initially
a residential zone with blocks of flats and
houses
along the river. Over the years, the flats were expanded, and a new supermarket was built, replacing the original residential zone. The number of
houses
decreased to three, and they were moved to the left of the bridges.
Moreover
, the building in the middle of the lake was replaced with additional flats, and the number of trees was reduced, leaving only three.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words resort, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • seaside resort
  • infrastructure improvements
  • tourist facilities
  • leisure areas
  • environmental impact
  • coastal line
  • green spaces
  • economic boom
  • sustainable development
  • urbanization
  • recreational activities
  • conservation efforts
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