The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates how the village of Ryemouth has been developed
past
Change preposition
for
25years
until now. Correct your spelling
25 years
To begin
, The most noticable
change was that the farmland Correct your spelling
noticeable
notable
has been
replaced by the golf and tennis area, leading to Wrong verb form
was
Correct article usage
the remove
remove
forest park next to it.
Replace the word
removal
Firstly
, the number of houses has been changed from 8 to 10 between 1995 and present, showing an increase in population in the region. The hotel has built the
new car park for their customers by expanding its area Correct article usage
a
beides
the road. Correct your spelling
besides
However
, the cafe has been stayed
in the same position without any Change to the active voice
stayed
further
changes. Moreover
, the road has been built to connect with other new houses.
Secondly
, there has been a dramatic deveolpment
near Correct your spelling
development
by
the sea. Shops Change preposition
apply
was
located in front of the fish market, but the new restaurant has been shown up. Change the verb form
were
Furthermore
, the new accomodation
has been built in the opposite of restaurants.Correct your spelling
accommodation
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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