The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates how the village of Ryemouth has been developed
past
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25years
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25 years
until now.
To begin
, The most
noticable
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noticeable
notable
change was that the farmland
has been
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replaced by the golf and tennis area, leading to
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the remove
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remove
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forest park next to it.
Firstly
, the number of houses has been changed from 8 to 10 between 1995 and present, showing an increase in population in the region. The hotel has built
the
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a
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new car park for their customers by expanding its area
beides
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besides
the road.
However
, the cafe has
been stayed
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in the same position without any
further
changes.
Moreover
, the road has been built to connect with other new houses.
Secondly
, there has been a dramatic
deveolpment
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development
near
by
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the sea. Shops
was
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were
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located in front of the fish market, but the new restaurant has been shown up.
Furthermore
, the new
accomodation
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accommodation
has been built in the opposite of restaurants.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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