The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays the total
number
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of
shops
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opened and closed in an unknown country over the span of 7 years.
Overall
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, the highest
number
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of
shops
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opened was in the
year
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2011,
while
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, in the same
year
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around 6500
shops
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were closed.
Although
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, in 2014 the
number
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of closures and
openings
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of
shops
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were almost similar. In the initial
year
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of 2011, around 9,000 new
shops
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were introduced, but in 2012 the
number
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of new
openings
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fell below 4,000.
However
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, after two years the
number
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of
shops
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increased by 2,000 by the end of 2014 and after that, in 2015 a similar trend of 2012 was experienced in the
openings
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. In 2015, the
number
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of new
openings
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started to fall by 4,000 and
this
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number
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stayed the same still 2017.
However
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, the data on shop closures is very different from
openings
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, other than in the
year
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2014. More than 6,000
shops
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were closed in 2011 and
this
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trend continued with minimal fluctuations till 2014, by the
year
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2015 leaving less than 1,000
shops
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closed.
However
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, by the end of 2018, the
number
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of
shops
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closed was more than the
openings
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of new
shops
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, year, openings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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