The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the total
number
of shops
opened and closed in an unknown country over the span of 7 years.
Overall
, the highest number
of shops
opened was in the year
2011, while
, in the same year
around 6500 shops
were closed. Although
, in 2014 the number
of closures and openings
of shops
were almost similar.
In the initial year
of 2011, around 9,000 new shops
were introduced, but in 2012 the number
of new openings
fell below 4,000. However
, after two years the number
of shops
increased by 2,000 by the end of 2014 and after that, in 2015 a similar trend of 2012 was experienced in the openings
. In 2015, the number
of new openings
started to fall by 4,000 and this
number
stayed the same still 2017.
However
, the data on shop closures is very different from openings
, other than in the year
2014. More than 6,000 shops
were closed in 2011 and this
trend continued with minimal fluctuations till 2014, by the year
2015 leaving less than 1,000 shops
closed. However
, by the end of 2018, the number
of shops
closed was more than the openings
of new shops
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