The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the total
number
of
shops
opened and closed in an unknown country over the span of 7 years.
Overall
, the highest
number
of
shops
opened was in the
year
2011,
while
, in the same
year
around 6500
shops
were closed.
Although
, in 2014 the
number
of closures and
openings
of
shops
were almost similar. In the initial
year
of 2011, around 9,000 new
shops
were introduced, but in 2012 the
number
of new
openings
fell below 4,000.
However
, after two years the
number
of
shops
increased by 2,000 by the end of 2014 and after that, in 2015 a similar trend of 2012 was experienced in the
openings
. In 2015, the
number
of new
openings
started to fall by 4,000 and
this
number
stayed the same still 2017.
However
, the data on shop closures is very different from
openings
, other than in the
year
2014. More than 6,000
shops
were closed in 2011 and
this
trend continued with minimal fluctuations till 2014, by the
year
2015 leaving less than 1,000
shops
closed.
However
, by the end of 2018, the
number
of
shops
closed was more than the
openings
of new
shops
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, year, openings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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