Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter: • mention why you are writing • explain why you would like to work from home • say how this can benefit you and the company No need for address Start with dear Sir/Madam,
#employer #employees #work #home #hr #manager #permission #six #months #benefit #company #address #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Priyanka Gondaliya and I am currently, employed as a junior software engineer in the data science department. I have recently discovered that the company
also
allows some employees to work
from home
and I am writing this
letter to gain permission to allow me work
from Add the particle
to work
home
for six months.
The opportunity to work
from home
would be ideal for me as,
I am Remove the comma
apply
working
mother and I have Correct article usage
a working
my
daughter Change the word
a
she
is just Correct pronoun usage
who
three-year old
. Add a hyphen
three-year-old
Although
, being an independent parent it is really difficult to manage my toddler and to work
in office
. Add an article
the office
an office
However
, my husband has a quite challenging work
schedule. He works as a full time
employee in Add a hyphen
full-time
hospital
setting, but he works Add an article
a hospital
the hospital
in
Change preposition
apply
a
night shift mostly and that's why he sleeps in Correct article usage
the
a
day and I have to manage my schedule Correct article usage
the
with
considering Change preposition
while
to
my kid.
I believe, working from Change preposition
apply
home
is really convenient to
me as in Change preposition
for
morning
I can focus Add an article
the morning
in
Change preposition
on
work
while
my daughter is sleeping which will be effective for the company too. Also
I can accomplish my daily task and finish my goal for the company which will be beneficial to the team as well.
I hope you will consider my request positively and initiate a plan with the management soon.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Priyanka.Add a comma
Also,
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task achievement
Make sure to proofread for grammatical consistency and correctness, such as subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., "allows some employees to work from home" should be "allows some employees to work from home.").
task achievement
Ensure to use a formal tone throughout the letter instead of using contractions and conversational phrases (e.g., "I am a working mother" instead of "I am working mother").
coherence cohesion
Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph to enhance the logical flow and readability. This helps in guiding the reader through the different points you are addressing.
coherence cohesion
Split complex sentences into simpler ones to avoid confusion and enhance clarity (e.g., "My husband has a quite challenging work schedule" can be split into two sentences).
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone, which is appropriate for a formal request.
complete response
All the required points are addressed, providing a complete response to the task.
logical structure
The letter has a clear beginning, middle, and end, with sections for introduction, explanation, and conclusion.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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