You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Aman,
Hope you are doing splendidly! It has been a long time since we caught up with each other. I want to give you a heads-up about my visa application. You would be cheered up to know that I got my study visa and coming to Canada next month.
I did my bachelor's degree in India, so I applied for a master's program. Fortunately, I would pursue my master's degree in accounting from Sheridan College, Brampton, Canada. It is a two-year program, starting on the 15th of September.
According to
immigration law, students can do 20 hours of work
in Canada. Although
I have 6 days of classes in college, I want to work
part-time to earn income from my living expenses. As you told me accommodation expenses are surging in Brampton, so my work
time work
I would earn for rent. Apart from
this
, it is a feasible way to get experience about Canadian culture.
I would be thankful if you could help in with my job. It would be good if you list all employment agencies, which provide part-time work
. I will call them later. Moreover
, you could refer me to your workplace. I am enclosing my resume with this
.
Thanks in advance for considering it.
Catch you up,
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Logical structure
In your letter, the ideas are presented clearly, but ensure each paragraph serves a single purpose to improve coherence.
Complete response
You've covered all the necessary points comprehensively. However, you could clarify your exact timing planes to enhance the response.
Suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is friendly and suitable for the context.
Greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are engaging and appropriate.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,