the two maps show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The maps elucidate how the access roads near a City hospital have been redeveloped between 2007 and 2010.
In general, what
stand
out from the maps is the number of ways to enter the City hospital was increased.
Change the verb form
stands
According to
what is shown, in 2007, there are
Ring Wrong verb form
was
road
and Hospital Capitalize word
Road
road
. The former Capitalize word
Road
is
surrounds the hospital from four directions, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
the latter is to the south of it. In addition
, there were six bus stop points on the flank of the Hospital road
.
In terms of development, in 2010, there were two new roundabouts , connecting the Hospital road
and City Capitalize word
Road
Road
with Ring road
. Capitalize word
Road
Furthermore
, a new bus station was built, which linked to two roundabouts. While
the location of the staff car park remained the same, a new car park for the public has been introduced in the east of the hospital, providing new access to the hospital. Finally
, the size of a new car park for stuff was shrunk compared to give space for the roundaboutsSubmitted by ayman_moh_2010 on
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