TASK 2: SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT SUCCESS IN LIFE COMES FROM HARD WORK AND DETERMINATION, WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT THERE ARE MORE IMPORTANT FACTORS SUCH AS MONEY AND APPEARANCE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Some individuals suggest that in order to achieve

success

, the

person

must have a resilient mindset and be determined enough to solely pursue their goals,

while

many others contend that there are several other primary factors that are worth mentioning

such

as financial standing and physical

appearance

are deemed significant.

This

essay judges both views of the issue and

also

explores why I believe that hard work and

determination

are more substantial to become successful. Some people believe that financial stability and outlook attractiveness are the two key features that greatly contribute to individual

success

,

this

is, of course, true in some aspects, a clear example of

this

is starting up a business, having enough capital is always better for entrepreneur, there are

also

occupations prioritize physical

appearance

more than a

person

's qualifications and experiences like model, singer, actor.

Therefore

, having a good amount of money and a pleasing

appearance

may be beneficial for a

person

's career.

Conversely

, others argue that diligence and

determination

an irreplaceable elements on the journey to a successful life because if an individual has enough

determination

and backbone, it is undoubtedly that he will overcome most of his challenges in his professional life and achieve his goal regardless of

appearance

and financial status. Particularly, Saint Laurent is renowned for being a businesswoman who has carried many successful feats in the cosmetic industry and

also

a self-made millionaire admired by people across the world, started her business with limited savings at home. Gradually, became wealthy

due to

her

determination

and excellent strategies in marketing. Notably, both views hold merit, yet I found

determination

and diligence of a

person

are superior and play a vital role in an entrepreneur's endeavour and

overall

success

,

although

possessing a charismatic arrival and abundant assets certainly helps that

person

to resolve the majority of issues in their life, having no ambitions to drive and to thrive them to a higher status, no long-term achievements are going to be made for sure, or at least making it them harder to be accomplished.

Additionally

,

while

having gorgeous and luxurious properties

along with

a seducing outlook may contribute to a

person

's

success

, diligence and

determination

play the most sufficient role in the journey of becoming successful an individual.