Some people say that when deciding how taxes should be spent, the government should prioritise health care. Others think that there are more important priorities for tax-payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One school of thought holds that the government should take priority on

healthcare

issues when allocating

taxes

,

while

others are of the opinion that

this

resource should be leveraged wisely in considering other sectors.

This

essay will examine both viewpoints before concluding that I lean towards the latter. Admittedly, there are some compelling reasons why some advocate the belief that money collected from

taxes

should be spent on

health

care. The key rationale is that individuals are becoming more serious about their

health

problems and they deserve high-quality

healthcare

services for their contributions to the country. Since private

health

care might be unaffordable for households and public services might be overloaded,

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reduces the accessibility of dwellers from rural areas to have their

health

check-up

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frequently.

Therefore

, focusing on

healthcare

,

for example

, improving

infirmary

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in underprivileged areas and equipping up-to-date technologies

as well as

facilities in hospitals will make them be able to welcome more patients with different requirements.

As a result

, the general public could be healthier

due to

more accessible

health care

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services and bring about a productive workforce for the country in the long term. Despite the aforementioned arguments, I side with those who assert that there are various crucial sectors that should be taken into consideration when the government leverages

taxes

. It is undeniable that education plays an important role in forming a potential and creative labour force that contributes to the development of a country. A well-educated generation can have high awareness about their

health

by being taught at schools or through national campaigns,

therefore

it could reduce the risk of suffering from illnesses.

For example

, obesity is on the increase but it might be avoidable if people can restrict the amount of unhealthy food consumption and follow a healthy routine, including exercising.

Furthermore

, the military is an essential sector that every nation prioritises since there are many scarce resources and lands being threatened.

Therefore

, ensuring a safe condition for its residents will be conducive to economic growth and maintaining its sovereignty as it is, contributing to a

prosperity

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and strong nation. In conclusion,

although

I acknowledge

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government spending on

healthcare

will confer upon the public a positive impact on their

healths

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, I am more convinced that the

long term

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benefits to a nation by allocating

taxes

on education and

military

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the military

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should not be underestimated.