Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Owing to the controversial issue of environmental challenges, some believe that the priority

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to be given to the extinction of specific types of plants and

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others mention that we should draw our attention to more imminent dangers. I strongly agree with the second group and argue that all

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should be focused on the mortal

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problem. On the one hand, it is understandable that we as humans have an obligation to prevent

animals

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and plants

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from disappearing

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from the earth’s surface.

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, the disappearance

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certain plants and

animals

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will cause a perilous loss in diversity of species on our planet.

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phenemenon

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phenomenon

can bring about

disfunctions

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dysfunctions

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in the standard procedures of our ecosystem. Meanwhile,

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we not only can witness pernicious effects

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the environment, but

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it has hazardous ramifications for human beings.

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, humans eat certain

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and if the species which these

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receive their nutrients from

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extinct, human life can suffer and be the unintentional casualty of

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process.

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, another important point to consider is that our attention ought not to be diverted from the immediate and

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imminent

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environmental threats, namely the futile

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. It is

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reason that the suffocating air

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, the mortal soil

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and the extremely threatening water

pollution

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should be given the top priority.

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, they are not just detrimental to human lifestyle, but

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from a more holistic approach,

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can bring about devastating and unbearable costs to the healthcare system.

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, the fruits and

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being consumed

everyday

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are being affected by all

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three types of aforementioned

pollutions

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pollution

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and cause various illnesses. All and all, I rang the alarm bell for

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society and

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the government to put combating

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pollution

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on top of its working agenda. In conclusion, I unequivocally am of the belief that air, soil and water

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constitute an existential threat not just to the environment, but

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to the human civilization on earth.

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the past efforts, governments are required to concentrate

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imminent danger and endorse combating

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pollution

in their official programs.