In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

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full possession of a

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or an apartment is far more significant than paying monthly income, in some areas around the world. It provides a sense of security and stability and I believe that it is a positive development.

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a

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is considered an important factor.

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, individuals who have full control over the house, give them a sense of security and stability. What I mean by

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is that having a

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can prevent you from excessive

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of money in the future. Not only it

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you to save money but

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provides full cover to your residential area which is not available when renting a

home

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.

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, people who buy homes in the early stage

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that the price of a

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can vary with time, and

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result

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they can gain profit when selling out.

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of positive aspects, owning a

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people a sense of autonomy.

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is because most prefer to decorate their rooms

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their own taste without

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consent from

landlord

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. These

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changing furniture, curtains, and portrait images.

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, there are some homes

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prefer to make changes after

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time of the year, to give

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look to their homes.

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, all these major changes cannot be done when renting an apartment or

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.

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, even though it is becoming a trend to become a homeowner rather than live

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the rules and

regulation

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set by the landlord, I believe that freedom , security and stability cannot be implemented in a house

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by someone else unless individuals buy themselves.