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the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in four countries in 2008

the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in four countries in 2008
The given table illustrates the expenditure on various items in 4 nations in the year 2008.
Overall
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, it can be seen that fast food/ drink was consumed the most in all 4 nations
while
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 leisure activities/ education was spent the least.
Additionally
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, even though the Vietnamese spent the most on leisure activities/ education,
China
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 was still the country spending the most among these nations. Looking at items which were spent the most. In terms of fast food/drink, the percentage of
China
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's expenditure outstanded other countries with 28,91% compared to approximately 17%.
Likewise
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,
China
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 spent 16,23% of their expenditure on shoes and watches, tripling that of the remaining regions. Regarding the items where all 4 countries consumed at least. As for
China
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as well as
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 Japan, both of them spent only 2,21% and 1,98% of their expenses on leisure activities/ education, respectively. Meanwhile, 2 Asian countries spent more than 1% of the remaining regions with roughly 3.2%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words china with synonyms.
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