IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Explain the situation • Say what action you would like the company to take

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Customer, I am writing to express my concern regarding the
camera
Use synonyms
 I purchased from your store on
monday
Change the capitalization
Monday
show examples
, which I returned for repairs on
saturday
Change the capitalization
Saturday
show examples
. Despite your assurance that the repair would be completed promptly, I have not yet received any updates about the status of my
camera
Use synonyms
. The
camera
Use synonyms
 was not functioning properly upon my arrival home, and I was disappointed to discover these issues. I appreciate your initial assistance, but I would like to request an update on the repair status, as it has now been a week since I
last
Linking Words
 communicated with your representative. I rely on
this
Linking Words
camera
Use synonyms
 for photography for a project and I would greatly appreciate your prompt attention to
this
Linking Words
 matter. If the repairs cannot be completed soon, I would like to discuss possible alternatives,
such
Linking Words
 as a replacement or refund. Thank you for your understanding. I look forward to your prompt response.
Correct the word
Yours
show examples
Your
Correct your spelling
Yours
show examples
 faithfully, Xamrayev Shaxriyor

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement
Consider providing a bit more detail about the problems with the camera you encountered. This can help provide a clearer context.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should be developed around a single clear idea. Ensure that each component of your communication has its dedicated section.
task achievement
The letter maintains a suitable and polite tone throughout, which is appropriate for formal communication.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear logical structure with an introduction, explanation of the situation, and a closing statement.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: