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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information about the production
levels
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 of the main kinds of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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Petroleum
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 shows the highest level than Coal and Natural gas. All production
levels
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 suddenly changed in 1991.
Petroleum
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levels
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 clearly show an increase in 1986,
however
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, in the
last
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 of 1986 there was a fast decrease. Hitting a low point of about 100 energy
units
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 in
Petroleum
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. Cola
levels
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 have the lowest point of all the other production. It is clearly the highest point it is about 80energy
units
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. Before 1986 the graph shows a decrease in Cola
levels
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. Between 1986 and 1991 the
levels
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 were around 60 energy
units
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. Natural gas had the same
levels
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 between 1981 and 1991.
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, there was an increase in the first of 1991 upward of about 100 energy
units
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. The graph shows in 2000 had very different
levels
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. In 2000 the natural gas
levels
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near
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were nearer
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 to the
Petroleum
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levels
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 than the Cola
levels
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words levels, petroleum, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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